tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27534268.post4423259242083129715..comments2023-09-28T17:42:33.072+10:00Comments on Kusems L. Poppington: A work of staggering geniusKusemshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14352697611528258740noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27534268.post-24376647088678916912008-08-18T15:09:00.000+10:002008-08-18T15:09:00.000+10:00This is certainly a work of staggering genius and ...This is certainly a work of staggering genius and not at all heartbreaking. I absolutely LOVE that Jayme says, "I don't care about my family but not my dog!" Awesome. Sure, everyone feels that way, but your character <I>said it out loud</I>. Yes!<BR/>What in sam hell was going on in your brain when you wrote that? Can you reflect on what it was that produced it and comment more? <BR/>I remember writing some really bad stuff in seventh and eighth grade as well. My teachers never taught me how to write, so I blame them.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27534268.post-52645448812169185362008-08-13T06:29:00.000+10:002008-08-13T06:29:00.000+10:00:-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27534268.post-91440060020583647142008-08-12T12:21:00.000+10:002008-08-12T12:21:00.000+10:00No, "OOOOOH" is the sound of them being dead. If ...No, "OOOOOH" is the sound of them being dead. If I had written now, and not when I was 12, I would have written "ungh" or something like that. Imagine them with tongues hanging out, "x's" over their eyes, going, "ungh..."Kusemshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14352697611528258740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27534268.post-29011653962286308942008-08-12T10:06:00.000+10:002008-08-12T10:06:00.000+10:00I especially like how everyone (who was previously...I especially like how everyone (who was previously dead) says "OOOOOH."<BR/><BR/>Pure genius. I'm sure you could write something as disturbingly funny again. Hm...this is a good writing assignment for me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com